A young woman laughs it off when she's informed the room she's staying in for the night is haunted, because ghosts don't exist.
Or do they?
It’s your typical kid ghost story.
By Hello from me champ
Excellent! Kept me wanting to read more!
Very very suspenseful and well detailed
By Stg man
As a fellow author, I look up to great projects like this one. One thing to appreciate is the "voice" of the narrator. Doesn't sound too proper, yet tell vivid details. I'd love to read a full length novel of Leckman's. But all I did was search "horror" and this was one of the first pieces to pop up. I see why!👻
Although the story was really short, I feel that the point was made. Interesting plot twist at the end. Would have loved this story to be extended with more drama.
Good but needs improvement
It was a short but pleasant read. My main critique are why was the girl in the hotel, who was she, who was she always talking to on the phone, what was her business in town? Next, a girl drinking a whole six pack of beer and eating a bunch of burritos seems unlikely. Also, why would she watch a scary movie if she is afraid of the dark. On the other hand it had a good ending.
Good quick read
Good Short Story
It was a good story but, a little predictable. With a little more than 40 pages, I wish it were longer.
This short story kept me reading. It was detailed and vivid similar to a Stephen King piece of work. Keep writing , readers who love horror will love this.
Too easy to figure out!
Awesome twist a little to gruesome on the death but an amazing book